When rain begins to fall,
You run
For cover;
When I begin to fall,
You run
From me
/
When day begins to fade,
You think:
‘Tomorrow’…
When I begin to fade,
What will
You think?
6thSymphony
A Life in Words in a Foreign Language
When rain begins to fall,
You run
For cover;
When I begin to fall,
You run
From me
/
When day begins to fade,
You think:
‘Tomorrow’…
When I begin to fade,
What will
You think?
Great post today thanks. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Thanks for stopping by! I’m glad you liked the post.
Every day, having made my own daily post, I hit the poetry tag here at WordPress and surf the first few results pages to see if any words leap out and grab my attention. Yours were among those that did today. This poem of yours is succinct, balanced, and wistful.
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Marie Marshall
writer/poet/editor/blogger
Scotland
http://mairibheag.com
http://kvennarad.wordpress.com
Thank you for your comment! I’m flattered that my poem attracted your attention. Good luck with your own writing!
Very poignant poem….would that someone would and could answer thoses questions.
Thanks a lot for your response! The answer to the poem’s question is, perhaps, as simple and uninspired as the speaker’s mood so he/she, still hopeful, prefers to ask the question instead.
Press “delete” for this person
Hahaha :)! But why press ‘delete’, Carl? One person’s lack of commitment and their partner’s complacency make them a perfect couple, non :)?